Proof #2: over the fence

Second rough, put a couple of hours into this one. Again, graphite, 7x10". This one shows the n-number and paint to much better effect, and the feeling hasn't suffered much for it. The moment of the flare was the client's first instinct as to what he wanted, and I feel it may be the stronger of the two.

Problems to be sorted out if this one goes full scale: Fix currently neutral dihedral. Get better reference for local geography; what I've seen seems to indicate that the eastern side of the field may be littered with small buildings. Finalize weak cloud structure--lone happy cumulus looks weird out there, though it was meant to direct. Stay tuned.